The sound of people screaming stung my ears as the wind tried stealing my fast lane ticket from me. The scent of juicy hot dogs and fire hot cinnamon churros drowned me. When I heard young kids behind me start crying I realized we were about to shoot down the slope. I gripped the metal bar as gravity pulled the coaster down to earth. My head jerked down to the shiny metal bar. I took a deep breath and could smell the metal around me. As we were pushed down the second drop, I tasted a gush of wind travel into my mouth. Suddenly, I tasted something strange in my mouth, as I swallowed I realized it must have been a fly! I started to hear guys in front of me laugh as the wheels slowly stopped moving. As I jumped out of the roller coaster, I saw a blurry version of my parents. The part I dreaded from the beginning has come, I started tasting the hot dog I ate before the ride sneak up my throat, as I ran into the closest bathroom.
Thursday, August 23, 2007
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The sound of people screaming and shouting stung my ears as the wind tried stealing my ticket to the fast lane from me. The sweet scent of juicy hot dogs and fire hot cinnamon churros drowned me. When I heard young kids behind me start howling, I realized we were about to shoot down the slope. I gripped the metal bar firmly as gravity pulled the coaster down to earth and my only escape. My head jerked down to the shiny metal bar, sending all the blood in my body up to my head. I took a deep breath and could smell the metal around me. As we were forced down the second drop, I tasted a cold gush of wind travel into my mouth. Suddenly, I tasted something strange and crunchy in my mouth, and as I swallowed I realized the bitter taste of a fly! I started to hear guys chuckle in front of me as the wheels gradually stopped moving. As I frantically jumped out of the roller coaster, I saw a blurry picture of my parents. The part I dreaded from the beginning has come. I started tasting the chewed-up, warm hot dog I ate before the ride sneak up my throat, and I ran into the closest bathroom.
I wonder why the kids were crying, was it that bad?!
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